My wife

私には、ベトナム出身の妻がいます。

妻は私と同い年です。

妻の趣味は、音楽を聞くこと、テレビを見ることなどです。

また、妻はビールが大好きで、居酒屋だけでなく、家でもよく飲みます。

バレンタインデーには、コンビニで缶ビールを買って帰ると大喜びしてくれます。

※（）内は校正、rephraseの内容

I have a wife who is from Vietnam.

She is as old as me.

Her hobby is listening to music and watching TV.

（→Her hobbies are listening to music and watching TV.）

She loves a beer, and she often drinks not only Izakaya a Japanese bar but also our home.

（→She loves drinking beer. She usually drinks not only at home but also in Izakaya, a Japanese bar. ）

She is extremely happy when I buy a beer and get home in Valentine day.

（→She is extremely happy whenever I buy beer for her every time I go home from work.

Sometimes I surprise her with presents during Valentine's day. And we also drink alcohol together. ）